Columbia Southern University Sports Fundraising Plan Together Project Alvin – some of your paragraphs in section 1 still need more thought development and

Columbia Southern University Sports Fundraising Plan Together Project Alvin – some of your paragraphs in section 1 still need more thought development and detail (proceeds, venue) and in your volunteer section. Be specific regarding roles and duties and responsibilities. For section 9: This is still not an event. You are describing an event where people show up and give money. Why would they give? Just because you call them there? Need more compelling story within your synopsis